Flash Fiction: Birth of Death

Today’s story is inspired by Shadows of Death by Andreale Garcia.

She guided her horse through the ashen field. The fire was consuming the forest, charring ancient oaks and fresh saplings alike. The sounds of the waking world were muted to her with the sound of the fire, the falling giants, all like distant thunder. Only the soft clomps of the horse’s obsidian shoes on the dirt, the sound of her leather armor, and the dull whispers of the skulls at her side reached her ears. The skulls were fresh, three woodsman caught in the blaze. The flowers wrapped around them were from Arbre De Grand-pere, the five century old oak that once dominated the heart of the woods. The horse was beginning to be covered in other similar flowers, the tiny spirits of the plants. The human skulls were beginning to find company from the bones of rodents, rabbits, a deer, a trio of doves. The skulls and flowers of the young tried to shout in their quiet voices, begging, pleading for this to be a nightmare. Arbre De Grand-pere was quiet.

“You do not beg,” she said. The horse was in the heart of the forest now, and she felt her reaping extend further east. The fire had jumped the river. Perhaps she would make two trips this day.

“What is there to say?” His voice, despite the youthful body he had been reduced to, sounded ancient and old. She recalled her mentor and nodded to herself at the similarity.

“All beg, even those resolved in life. Some of these flowers belong to many near your age. Even this man,” she said, pointing to one skull, “was calm and resolved in his dying. He begs now, if only in whisper.”

There was that silence of movement as she guided the horse to the river.

“Do you not hear them?” Arbre said. “What they beg for? What he asks of you?”

“Salvation, peace, to be brought to their comfortable resting place.” She said it with absolution, so jaded to the words of the dead in these long millennia.

“No, not this man,” The spirit of the old tree said. “Listen. Listen as only one such as you can.”

She halted the horse and listened. The sound of the fire grew quieter, and the many voices of the dead now filling her saddle rose to her ears.

“What is this?” she started when a single voice spoke out above the rest.

“Please accept my sacrifice. Please death. Accept it so this may stop. Please, oh why don’t you stop?”

“Your sacrifice?” She said. Her hands wrapped around the skull and brought it before her. Around the bone she could make out the shadow that once was the man. His eyes beckoned towards her. “What sacrifice do you perform?”

“These woods, this blaze. We set it so that Marilina may live. A great sacrifice.”

“Plant and animals so a human may live,” Arbre said. He sounded disgusted.

She found herself chuckling. It was a hollow empty thing, dry and crumbling in her long dead lungs.

“Oh, mortal. You think death will restore life? Sacrifice to restore the lost? No, no we reap all death, and we are greedy. But as you have been so giving to us today, we will reward you. We will grant you something greater. A memento to your gift.”

The old man’s skull screamed but she smiled at him. She would finish her reaping here, and return to the underworld. There, all would be deposited, ignorant of what they have become after the ride.

“What holds for him?” Arbre asked.

“He will retain his knowledge of death, and in doing so will experience it again and again until the last sun sets.”

She could feel Arbre De Grand-Pere shudder, then try to whisper something that did not meet her ears.

“Speak, ancient oak. Speak. I would hear your consol.”

“I would, I would like to bear witness to this. For the sake of my forest.”

She frowned. This was not what she expected.

“You would suffer too. You would experience your death endlessly. It would not bring you joy.”

“It would bring me closure.”

“These are not the concepts of your kind. Only animals that think know of the true passing of time. I would not see a soul like yours corrupted by beasts.”

Arbre bristled.

“Then maybe we can come to a bargain,” he said. “Allow me to witness it but once, then I can travel with you. A sprig of once living nature in your helm until the last sunset.”

She nodded.

“Very well, ancient oak. A glimpse of righteous, then an eternity of reaping.”

She didn’t like this agreement, but it was what she had made millennia ago when she too was an ancient wooden giant. He sounded like her mentor, but she would take that role for him. In time, the ancient oak would be a reaper too. In time, he would forget the man who burned the woods. A nameless soul in a sea of the entropy of the world.

The figure of death as a lone dark skeletal form riding on a pale horse, the reaper with their scythe, or a punky dressed teen hanging out before a mob scene. Death has appeared in many forms in media over the years, and it’s always a stirring squirming thought in our heads.

I also find fascination with stories that talk about deals with the devil. When they involve death, don’t those deals require a certain bit of a more direct supernatural advocate? Today’s story was a combination of those two concepts, and with the additional notion that even the spirits plants need to be reaped you end up with a very busy reaper during a tragedy.

Flash Fiction: Under The Crown

Today’s story is inspired by Manticore, by Lucas Graciano.

“You want me to spare you?” The beast sounded furious. Its claws racked at the rocks, reached for me. “After all you’ve done?”

I caught my breath. He couldn’t get in the small rocky hollow I had found in the hill. This had been my plan D, the worst case scenario. Plan A was to have the arrow in the manitcore’s side be between his eyes. He had dodged at the last moment. Plan B was the nets the creature’s spiny tail had shredded. Plan C was running before he spotted me, but I had failed to realize how well the creature could see at night. Plan D was to hide in the rock until he got bored.

It had been nine hours and he still wasn’t bored.

“Mistakes were made,” I said. “You were the wrong creature I was slated to find.”

“Lies!” The beast screamed at me. “I know of the bounty the river men have on my mane. I know because you are not the first hunter. Nor will you be the last.”

It clawed at a loose rock again. It had been working that one for a few hours. I pushed my sword out and trust it again at the paw, nearly hitting it this time.

“Stop that. I won’t let you in.” I honestly didn’t know if moving that rock might help the manticore further into the cave, but he was convinced now I thought it was important to keep him away from the stone. It kept him from noticing the real entrance.

“I will eat you, most of you. Then I will parade your carcass over the crown as a warning to the next hunter. Your bones will bleach in burning sun.”

“You’ve really thought this through, haven’t you?”

He roared.

“So then what happened to the last hunter?” I asked.

“I ate him, and put the remains on the crown.” He reached for the stone again but pulled his paw back before I even raised my blade.

“I didn’t see him. Not a good warning if the next hunter doesn’t see it.”

The beast paused.

“No, It, it wasn’t. You are still here. I will not eat you! I will just kill you and leave your carcass on the crown!”

“For the crows? And why are you so obsessed about the crown? What crown are you talking about?”

“Here, above us!”

“Above these rocks? I can’t see up there. And no hunter’s going to try and get up there if they’re just going to shot at you.”

“I can easily see it,” he said.

“Well, go over by the pond, down there. That’s where I approached. See if you can see it from there.”

The manticore paused, then left the entrance of the cave. I didn’t budge as I listened to his large leathery wings striking the air.

“Yes, you’re right,” I heard his voice in the distance. “I cannot see it from here. I will eat you and leave your carcass here at the river bed as a warning to the next hunter.”

Good luck to him,” I thought. I considered leaving, but thought better of it as the large wings came back.

“I will eat you and leave your body at the river” He said as he approached. He scratched at the entrance and then stopped. “Are you still in there?”

I could hear his claws scrapping at the ground outside the cave as if he was pacing or moving back and forth. He then reached his claw in again towards the rock, but I didn’t poke him with the blade. The rock fell with ease and the entrance opened just a little wider. I prayed to the forest this would work.

“You’re gone! A trick! A trick to get me to leave the cave!” His voice grew louder as his anger grew, and then I heard those large wings again.

I poked my head out of the cave and saw him heading towards the river town I had come from. They could keep their gold. This hunt wasn’t worth it any more. I headed the opposite direction as quickly as I could.

Nothing wrong with a fun romp through the world of fantasy, hunting monsters, and trying to not be dinner. On a side note when I read this story out loud during editing, I found myself rather painfully speaking deep for the manticore’s voice. If this one ever comes out in audio, know I suffered for the art.

Flash Fiction: Mortal Line Express

This story is part of the archived and updated series of previous works.

Hello and welcome from the Mortal Lines Express Company; the next level in transportation for the corporeally deceased. You’ve chosen a multi-world leader in postmortem travel and we intend to make your journey to the religious iconographical promised land of your choosing as pleasant as possible

During your trip, there are a few rules and regulations you will need to adhere to in order to successfully reach your religious iconographical destination of choice. Please listen closely as you will not be warned again.

Be sure to keep all incorporeal essence of your ghostly apparition inside the cabin at all times. Do not inquire with the staff on the dangers of leaving part of your essence outside the train’s exterior. Should you insist on inquiring be careful not to damage the train during your expulsion into the cold disruptive terror of the phantom universe of the living world. The staff is here to make your trip pleasant, not fulfilling.

Remember to stay in the correct iconographical related cabin for your chosen destination. If your iconographical destination is not a registered cabin, please move to the end car at this time to avoid misplacement. A staff member will be along shortly to offer you employment until your iconographical representation is popular enough to warrant it as an acceptable destination. All offers of employment are one time and effective immediately. Failure to accept an offer of employment will lead to your immediate expulsion into the cold disruptive terror of the phantom universe of the living world.

Should a living person or persons board the train at any time due to a quest, mistake, talisman gathering, religious/spiritual/metaphysical mission, greed, or random wandering, be sure to report this incident to the conductor and avoid the inevitable battle as you may be disrupted and left behind in the cold disruptive terror of the phantom universe of the living world.

Please note that this last rule need not apply to necromancers, non-human entities, and other travelers to and from the mortal world that possess a special pass. You will know this pass when you see it as the mortal languages you are used to hearing could not comprehend the true description of such an artifact.

Should you personally cause a disruption on the train that causes a delay in schedule or damage to the train or employee, you will not be pushed into cold disruptive terror of the phantom universe of the living world. Rather, you will be imprisoned and have your incorporeal form twisted into part of the train to help repair or improve its functionality for eternity or until the services offered by the Mortal Line Express Company are no longer functional or necessary. Whichever comes first.

Again, thank you for choosing Mortal Line Express Company for your post-living needs. Your eternity is our business.

This story was originally written back in 2010 during my first attempt at writing flash fiction on a regular basis. While the majority of that fiction is evident of my skill level at the time, this one struck me as fun enough to bring forward. It’s had some editing since it’s original posting on March 11, 2010, but the concept remains the same.

Flash Fiction: Derelict of a Lost City

Today’s inspiration comes from this digital painting from Marcus Lindgren.

The Roanoke was drifting with a clockwise spin port side. It was an old husk, with markings of an empire that burned millennia ago. The design was practical even for how old of tech it was, a hammer head model that could slam through the stars and deal with any lose particles that would rip apart the rest of the hull.  The paint was long ago baked white by the local star and wispy cloud of decay seeped from the back of its spent reactor.

“How bad is that radiation?” Tev asked.

“Not terrible. Wouldn’t want to go in there without shielding but the worst would be gone by now.”

“Then what’s that smoke?” He asked. “I don’t think the decay should be that visible to the naked eye.”

Joan chewed her cheek and looked over her console.

“That, that I’m not sure of. We should launch an array.”

“Let’s launch an array. I’d rather be safe than boiled.”

Tev turned his seat and set up the firing pattern. The probe array control let out a soft chirp of confirmation.

“Probes away,” he said.

A dozen lights appeared on the display, each a half meter cylinder filled with sensors, transmitters, and smart analyzers. The screen reacted to the data they broadcasting as they neared the Roanoke’s trail.

“Lots of trace metals,” Tev said. “Radiation but about on par with the earlier readings. Lots of carbon dioxide and water too. It’s almost like wood smoke.”

On the screen, half a dozen of the lights of the probes started to dip into the trail. As quickly as they do, their signals stop.

“Tev.”

“I know,” he said. “It’s got to be a chaff effects from the metals and radiation. Nothing to worry about.”

On the screen, the remaining six probes begin to skim the surface of the smoke on their approach to the hull of the Roanoke. Trails of smoke seem to bob up and down under them. Joan reached up and pulled the screen, until the feed zoomed in on the streaking form of a probe, using its own camera to enhance the detail around it.

“Tev, look at this.” On the screen the smoke changed from thick plums to long threads. They pulsed as the probes neared, until one whipped out and slapped a probe. Where it touched the cylinder, the smoke latched on and begin to trail after the little point of light. “It’s pulling it in,” she said. The tendril of smoke following the probe reached and connected with the smoke trail of the derelict. When they connected, the probe was yanked into the wake of the Roanoke.

“The ships changing course,” Tev said. “The Roanoke is changing course.” He paused as the console fed him the derelict’s new direction and speed. “It’s moving to intercept. It’s picking up speed and moving to intercept us.”

I like ghost stories and I love space fiction and so, given the chance, I like to toss out a combo platter of the two. Space is a mysterious place, and already we’re starting to cloud it up with old tech and pieces of history. In ten, twenty, and thirty thousand years what will be up there for our descendants to find? What treasure or knowledge might be discovered and lost before it’s returned to the future of human society?

What should have stayed lost?

Flash Fiction: Price To Pay

Today’s story was influenced by a music complication featuring some of the tunes from Shadowrun Returns. The specific track is Blood Hounds. The compilation video is here, and is the same music I listened to for Tuesday’s story.

I touched his forehead. It was warm still, and he squirmed a little in protest. I nodded, then took my dagger and slit his throat. I suppose I could have saved myself the trouble and just tried to kill him immediately but I wasn’t comfortable with the thought of desecrating a body. I know, it doesn’t make sense, but it’s my way. I need you to understand that, as you go through my memories. I need you to know why I’m doing things this way.

Franklin had been the last of the squad, besides me. The bulk of them had died from the fire wave of bugs. Invaders. Look, whatever you want to call them. I’m not clear what they are anymore. They had crawled out of the hatch as soon as we tried to board the vessel. They came fast and began slicing open pressure suits and skin with every touch of their vine like bodies. It was supposed to be a simple recon job, but you bulkhead warriors didn’t bother to tell us what was on board.

The four of us that lived through the attack pulled back, trying to seal the airlink’s hatch and save ourselves. That’s when Jenn died. They wrapped their limbs around her and… I’ve never seen a body taken apart like that before. Look, I used to work at a butchery house on Raekin III. I know what how fast a bovine can be killed, shredded, and cleaned. That’s merciful quick work. She suffered. She suffered as she watched parts of come undone in strips. It was done to hurt, to hurt her and to fuck us out of our minds.

It damn near worked too. Franklin was the one who attacked Hugo when he slipped on the latch. I think Hugo would have had it too, if Franklin hadn’t slammed him head first into the metal door. I managed the handle but another vine already reached in and grabbed Hugo’s limp form. It yanked and yanked until strips of him floated around the room. My knife cut the bug’s limb. Invader. Sorry. Invader’s limb off. The damage was done though.

That’s when I tackled Franklin, slamming him against the bulkhead and knocking him out. He cost Hugo his life. He paid with his. I don’t regret it. I don’t care what you do with me now. I just want you to understand why. I’m no traitor, I’m not infected by those things.

Really? I guess that’s one way for me to pay for a taken life. Yeah, I’ll go back out there. I’ll face them again. I’ve got no one else to lose.

Working in first person direct narrative is a weird experiment for me. I’m used to avoiding the word ‘you’ outside of dialogue boxes, so using it within the context of a direct narrator is a fun experiment. First person limited narratives tend to be my bread and body for longer pieces, which third person narratives representing most of my shorter flash pieces. In the coming weeks I’m going to use these flash pieces to experiment with styles, and see what works, what fails, and what’s worth developing further.

Flash Fiction: Swapping

Something about this image from Regiane Cristina caught my attention. Combined with listening to Daft Punk’s Random Access Memory and this piece came together.

The city beyond the window was quiet and cold, but Desire only heard the rhythmic thrum from the club under her. She had come here to escape the lights, the pulsing bodies, and the smell of burnt biohol. The bar always over cooked the stuff. It smelled like shit but it made the patrons looser with their wallets. The club would make another killing tonight between booze and body rentals. A night of fantasy and false memories.

It was all fake, she knew it, but she was part of that world. Her own body was sitting in stasis downstairs, waiting for her to come back. He wouldn’t budge or age or hurt, and that’s the only thoughts she tried to keep for him in her mind. The rental was temporary, but it was her fantasy for the evening. Swapping was popular these days, and clubs like this were the cheaper way of getting different body types. Desire, her name for the night, had been many things the past year. Men of various ages, women, mostly young like this body, a few animals but that was rare, and one time a plant.

She hadn’t liked being a plant. Too little personal control.

The city beyond was so quiet looking, and her mind was echoing that. Her thoughts were so noisy lately. It’s what appealed to her about swapping. That body below, it’s pains and aches and worries and anger and concerns, they hammered on him and she hated being him for it. In these dreams she could leave that pain behind. She could be like that city looked.

Quiet.

Cold.

Desire took a sip of her glass of biohol. The burnt flavor filled her mouth and tickled her nose. She could hear the DJ below introducing another dancer. Another model for rent. She squinted and her body brought up the club feed. The music slammed her before the visual showed her the new form. Another young woman. She was disappointed when she realized she’d been that one before. The feed died away as she squinted again.

The city beyond was so cold looking. It was supposed to be a chilly evening, but these bodies didn’t register discomfort. Well, at least she hadn’t programmed it to. Her real body hated the cold. It made his joints ache, and it compounded when the rain was coming in. She chased the thought away. This was supposed to be a vacation from those worries.

From him.

She debated going back downstairs and finding someone who wanted to share their bodies, but thought against it. Other people, other entities in other bodies didn’t interest her. It wasn’t the point. She’d played with others when she first started to swap; it had been why he’d tried it. But the act of having of a freed mind, of being disconnected from the worries of him; that’s what captured her. She loved that freedom. Other people and fulfilling his sexual desires didn’t matter in most of the bodies she had been.

She wondered if he resented her, them, the other bodies, the way they resented him. It was her mind and she thought the same thoughts, but freed of his concerns and pains and wants, she wondered if they were truly his thinking anymore. His mind. She was running in circles again. She needed to focus on something. The city.

The city beyond the window was quiet and cold, and only the thrum of the club below filled her ears. She let it fill her mind.

For now, she wasn’t him.

For now, she was just her.

For now, whoever she really was became quiet and cold.

There’s a lot of confusion with defining our “us-ness” in human life. It’s not something new, but we’re more apt to talk about it more these days I think. Whether it’s personal mental identity, sexual or gender identity, long term or short term personalities, I think many of us enjoy escaping our “self” every now and then. Being able to make a choice, be that thing, and then go back to our own issues after the fantasy is over.